Tyler Waits, you have a "berry" good blog! Haha! There is one thing you need to improve on though. You need to improve on your punctuation! I got stuck for a second reading 1 or 2 things. Other than that, very good job Tyler!
One thing that I think you could work on is that sometimes you had a really short sentance and it made me stop for a second. Besides the short sentances, your blog was very good.
One thing you could fix on you blog is how long you paragraphs are. You had a very long one and then they were very short, how you could fix this is by making your sentences longer.
Tyler Waits, you have a "berry" good blog! Haha! There is one thing you need to improve on though. You need to improve on your punctuation! I got stuck for a second reading 1 or 2 things. Other than that, very good job Tyler!
ReplyDeleteOne thing that I think you could work on is that sometimes you had a really short sentance and it made me stop for a second. Besides the short sentances, your blog was very good.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you could fix on you blog is how long you paragraphs are. You had a very long one and then they were very short, how you could fix this is by making your sentences longer.
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